Wednesday, November 25, 2009

The holiday camp mystery

This story was written by key words reading scheme. The character in the story are the foreman, two boys, Simon and John, Tom and Jane. Their father and mother are also in the story.

The story started something like this. The foreman was telling Simon and John about the new construction work that was going on this few days. He showed the two boys around the construction work places. Suddenly, they found a tunnel but they did not know where did the tunnel links to. The foreman went into the tunnel and used the torch to shine onto the wall. He spotted nothing. The two boys wanted to go into the tunnel to take a good look but the foreman told them that he would like to speak to their father before letting them going into the tunnel. Their father told him that if the renovation is done and it is quite safe, they may go in. After the renovation was done ,they could go in and they went right deep into the cave. They slowly go to each of the open cave. When they went into the last cave,they saw steps continuing. They followed after the steps. Finally, it led them to the other island of the construction work. Over there,they saw someone following after them. John shouted took chase and they ran after him. They slowly walk down the steep hill and saw themselves back on the construction side. Then,the man that was working took a heavy wood and covered it. He used a lock and locked it so that nobody could enter. The boys are the only one who have the key. They decided to bring their cousin for a look. When it was done,they pitched a tank. John found a man moving a boat,carrying a few large boxes. He decided to inform the police plus his father. The police found some investigation and knew who they were. After that ,they caught the thief. They took their cousin to the swimming pool and started splashing everywhere. They had a lot of fun.

That was the end of the story!