One beautiful Sunday morning, Tim and Tom went to play beside the canal. They jumped into the canal and threw their ball in. But the water level was too high and they shouted for help.
A girl heard the two boys shouting. She quickly swam to them because they were drowning.
She saved the two boys. The boys thanked her.
Their parent also thanked the brave girl for saving their children. Tim and Tom learnt a lesson which was not to play in the canal again.
The girl's parents also praised her for doing a good deed.
1 comment:
i can see improvement in your writing. it is more structure and now and the story flow pretty smooth. well done and keep going.
Daddy.
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