Thursday, June 11, 2009

A wonderful day

The cheerful chirping of birds heralded a new day.The golden sun cast its warmth all around.My mother wake me up.We have our breakfast at the Coffee City.Then,we went to the library to borrow some books for my two little sister and me.When we finished borrowing,I went to the scanner to scan the b00k.My mother said that she wonder weather can she stay here for a week.

In the afternoon,I do homework on the dining table as it is too hot to be in the room.I do it while watching the television.


At night,I went for a swim.My father went to help others tuition.When I finished swimming,My mother bring us to have our dinner while waiting for father to drive us back home.


It was a happy day for me.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

i am glad that you tried and done your post. the stories seems well written but the non-friction posts are mono and dull.

try to select an event that happen in the day and not describe what had happen the entire day.

try doing some planning before you write your post, i am certaining sure this will helps to write better.

keep writing, results will surface.

daddy