An exciting adventures

It was an afternoon.My eyes were drooping close when my father suggested of bringing us to IMM.It was then that my eyes brighten up.

we then went there by car.My father drove us there.when we reached there,we went to the Popular.I bought a recorder while my younger sister bought a yoyo.the,we went to "World Of Sports" to buy a sport shoe for Clarice.After that,we wanted to go backhoe.So we pressed onto the lift buttons.Once we went in,we did not know that Cherry was not in.After a whiled , my mother realised that Cherry was lost,so she pressed onto the lift panel.when we reached to the ground floor,I saw her running about so I ran towards her.She was terrified hat she cried so loudly.

What a terrible adventure!