Michael woke up with a huge grin on his face.It was his eleventh birthday! He wondered what presents his parents would give him.Michael immediately went to brush his teeth and shower.
After that,he went down for his breakfast.Michael had expected his parents to wish him a happy birthday but they did not.Michael felt sad and disappointed.Usually,the talkative boy would talk a lot at breakfast but he did not do so on that day.
After breakfast,Michael walked back to his bedroom.Just then,his mother opened the door for his friends to enter his house.Michael was thirsty,so he went down for a cup of drink.While he was pouring the cup of water,"Surprise!Happy Birthday,Michael!"he heard someone shout.Michael turned over and saw his friends.The birthday boy was happy once again.His parents walked over to him.
Michael's father came out of the kitchen carry a big cake.His mother led Michael's friends upstairs and into the party room.All they saw was some food prepared by Michael's mother."thank you!mummy!"exclaimed Michael.
Michael's friends ate and play at his house.Michael wished that the next day would never come.He hoped that he could celebrate his birthday every single day.Soon,it was time for his friends to leave.Michael's friends bade him good-bye .After all his friends had left,the excited birthday boy unwrapped all his presents.There were his favourite comics,kite,racing car and more.."what a wonderful day it was!"Michael smiled to himself
1 comment:
sentense formation is great with few grammertical mistakes. However it seems to be that you have copied quite abit from the original essay.
you can use some of the sentences but i would prefer read story with local taste. for example, you could have describe one of the birthday party that you have attended in yishun last year.
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